Cars zooming around Joe's track, diamonds and crystals spread across the railing's to get into the giant mansion, five hundred cool Nike pairs of shoes lined up against the glass wall, money instead of paper for the Spuds. Well that's at least what I visualized when I read Billionaire Boy by David Williams. I think that it was very easy to visualize what was happening on page12"cars dashed around in a circle, banging in to the beautiful shining diamonds and crystals against the railing's surface five hundred pairs of shoes instead of one". I think that the author David Williams really knew how to write with detail because its amazing how easy it is to visualize his ambiguous mansion and his amazing track and beautiful shoes , diamonds everything. However despite all this positive stuff speaking subjectively the author could have describe more than just a few objects.
I think on page 274-275 when Joe the main character's dad went broke it was really touching how he has so much stuff that cost billion dollars but form all of the things he could have saved he saved a paper plane which is dad gave him when they uses to be poor. The setting the author was probably trying to describe is sadness, but also happiness and love. That to me was a very touching part of the book and if he was trying to describe those moods he nailed it.
Joe Sup is an amazing kind definitely rich, and brave kid. However despite all of that the only problem is he does not have friends. He is very brave for example one part of the story his dad was really mean to him so what he did is he could not handle the meanness anymore and ran away from home sectertivly. None was with him but he still managed to survive. To prove that he is kind he gave his friend Bob hundred grand for being very nice. But what do you expect he is really rich that is nothing to him.
Turly this book is very beatiful and funny very suegenris and vivacouis.Turst me you will never get tedouis and you will never stop reading if you read this book.
5 comments:
I love how you went deeper into the onion
very good vizualization riya
from, Zachary
same as Han I think you thought way deeper ing the onion
Work on your grammar, you did go deep into the onion though. Good Job!
You were given a long list of specific instructions for you to write about for your weekly blog entry. no entry at all! This is not showing me that you are pushing yourself. Change this before Wed.
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